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Topic: Copywriting
Help With A Few Sentences
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Would you please compare these sentences and give your opinion on which one is more effective?
!. Call and consult with us about your specific battery issue. If our expertise isn’t evident, you lose nothing.
Alternate.
Consult with us about your specific battery issue. Our expertise will be evident.
2. Doesn’t it make sense to have someone who specializes in nothing but auto electrical systems evaluate and repair your car?
Alternate.
It makes sense to have someone who specializes in auto electrical systems evaluate and repair your car.
If you go to this page you can see how I'm using them at this point.
https://www.keystoneautoelectrical.com/ppc/car-battery-problem.html
Thanks for your input.
Jerry